Feeback Please

I have written two, 2-part stories. The Sparkle to the Soul and Life in Sauderville. I would really like some feedback on these stories. I had a lot of fun writing them and it won’t make me stop writing if they suck, but some constructive criticism would be helpful.  Thank you!

https://sereneartiste.wordpress.com/2015/05/04/finish-it-1-life-in-sauderville/
https://sereneartiste.wordpress.com/2015/05/07/finish-it-7-life-in-sauderville-part-ii/
https://sereneartiste.wordpress.com/2015/04/28/finish-it-10-the-sparkle/
https://sereneartiste.wordpress.com/2015/04/30/the-sparkle-to-the-soul-part-ii/

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